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From:
Sean Greeley
West of Duke
University, Durham NC |
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| Dear Fellow Fitness Professional, |
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I can guarantee that most of the money you are spending on marketing right now is being
wasted because of this one, easy to fix factor…
….weak, boring, under-performing sales copy.
Now I’m not saying
it’s your fault, it’s just a fact. Loads of other fitness
businesses are flushing their marketing dollars down the toilet too,
because of lousy sales copy.
Here’s the thing though, now that you know this; you’ve got
no excuses for doing it anymore… |
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Improve Your Sales Copy
And Improve Your Profit! |
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Sales copy is any piece of
promotional literature or text that tries to sell something - whether
that is a service, a product, or even an idea – basically
it’s persuading through the written word.
And as a business owner
I’m sure you appreciate that you need to do this “quite a
lot”, in fact your primary form of communication with clients and
prospects will be through sales letters, newsletters, e-mails, flyers,
faxes, postcards and more!
So becoming a better
copywriter should be top of your “to do list”, assuming you
want to increase the effectiveness of your marketing pieces, and the
profit they produce for you, that is.
You do? Then here’s how to get started… |
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Watch This NPE DVD Copywriting Crash Course Package, Implement The Secrets And Profit. Simple! |
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In this new DVD package
Eric Ruth (the best copywriter in the fitness industry according to Dan
Kennedy) will reveal the most coveted copywriting secrets, AND hand you
ready-to-roll formulas that you can use to create high profit marketing
pieces over and over again.
You will not find anything else as valuable as this, anywhere else! See
for yourself… |
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DVD #1 – Copywriting Secrets Of
The Fitness And Weight Loss Market |
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When you watch the first DVD, you will discover… |
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8 success principals for writing high converting sales copy. |
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Why you don’t have to be a great writer to be a great copywriter.
In fact, if you weren’t great at English as a kid, then
you’ve got a bit of a head-start, because what the works of Mark
Twain and Ernest Hemingway teach you about copywriting is worthless! |
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4 simple copywriting formulas that you can use to write sales copy for any marketing medium and always make a profit. |
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How to quickly and easily write strong, compelling sales messages (even if you hate writing) by
making sure you spend 85% of your time on this crucial preparation step. |
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Which of these sales appeals – fear of loss or desire for gain - will generate the highest response for you? |
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10 smart marketing diagnostic and profiling questions you can use to “get inside”
the head of your prospect and find out exactly what makes them tick.
And what’ll make them become your happy, paying fitness clients. |
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How to create an irresistible offer by translating your fitness service features into benefits. This is so essential, and yet so often overlooked. When you get this, it will take your business to the next level. |
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10 examples of personal training features translated into benefits, including hidden benefits of fitness
training that you might not be thinking about, but your prospect will
be. |
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9 examples of group training features translated into benefits, including hidden benefits of fitness
training that you might not be thinking about, but your prospect will
be. |
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How to position yourself with this crafty copywriting technique, as the “best choice” fitness professional in town – even if you charge twice as much as the competition! |
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How
to overcome your prospects objections by predicting them in advance,
and eliminating them as an excuse “not to buy” from you. If
your prospect doesn’t have a reason not to buy, then
they’ve obviously only got one choice left – to buy! |
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The
#1 most important human emotion that must always be played on in your
sales copy to ensure maximum profit selling your fitness services. |
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fundamental headline triggers that emotionally hooks the reader and
forcibly drags them deep into your sales message - reading every single
word until they are inevitably convinced to become your client. |
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A
big tried and true list of emotional appeals that you can litter
throughout your copy to keep the readers eyes on your sales page and
their hands on their credit card. If you can make someone emotionally invested, you can sell them anything. |
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What
WIIFM stands for, and why you must always keep it at the forefront of
your mind when you are writing sales copy for your fitness business. |
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What you must always remember to add to your sales copy to make it believable.
Our industry has one of the most skeptical markets and if you want your
prospects to become buyers you must make them believers in the fitness
results you promise. |
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The one tool you must begin building right now, it will make writing great sales copy a cinch, and feed you for life. |
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What you must always, always, always have on every marketing piece you produce. |
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How
to write crystal clear sales copy that’s easy to understand.
Remember that confused people don’t buy, so clarity is the key to
a healthy profit. |
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What to use early and often throughout all of your sales copy. |
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A
successful sales letter that you can ethically “steal” and
use as your own. Writing high profit sales copy for your fitness
business is easy when someone else has already done the grunt work for you! |
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And much, much more! |
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…When you infuse
these secrets into your sales copy, you will see a massive increase in
your marketing response, and your profit. And best of all, you’ll
be in the only one in your town using them, so you can clean up!
But just to make doubly sure, I am going to give you a second DVD too… |
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DVD #2 – Real Life Sales Copy Case Study |
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In the second DVD, Eric
goes through a full sales letter for a fitness business, breaking it
down into bite size building blocks so you can see exactly what goes in
to writing a high-profit winner.
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Why you need to keep your sales copy “active” – so the reader can see themselves achieving the results, become involved in your offer, and buy-up your fitness services. |
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How
to pump-up your bullet points so they’re not bland and boring,
but energetic and explosive. Bullets should make up a LARGE chunk of
your sales copy, and all too often many people tend to screw them up. Avoid this costly mistake. |
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The
one sub-head that should be in every single one of your marketing
pieces. This is the ultimate credibility builder for your fitness
business, and credibility means cash. |
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A subliminal copywriting technique that makes exercise seem easy, even if your fitness program consists of 1,000lbs presses! |
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How to double your response rate AND build a mailing list of highly qualified leads
by adding a compelling “B” offer to your sales copy. |
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Why
you must provide your reader with ordering options so that everyone who
wants to take action can, no matter what the situation. |
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An
easy to create USP (unique sales proposition). Almost all fitness
professionals can’t think of one unique thing that sets them
apart from their competitors. Spend just 30 seconds on this and
you’ll have more USP ideas than hairs on your head! |
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What 5th graders can teach you about becoming an excellent fitness copywriter. |
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Why you should use this punctuation mark less than you think! |
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And much, much more! |
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…As you can see,
between the two DVD’s you’re getting a host of highly
valuable, profitable information about how to create sales copy the
sells like hot
cakes.
BUT,
I’m still NOT finished. I am also going to give you… |
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A Few Bonuses That Will Make You
An Ace Fitness Copywriter – And Faster! |
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Not only are you getting
to benefit from all the valuable “know how” shared in the
DVD package, I am also going to give you a chunky copywriting secrets
report and a few tools to help you get good at this crucial skill
A.S.A.P.
In the bonus pack you will get… |
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Copywriting Secrets Of The Fitness And Weight Loss Market ($97 value) – Inside this report you will discover proven headline formulas
for writing the perfect header every time, copywriting books you MUST
read, 22 elements of a winning sales letter (checklist) and more! |
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Eric Ruth’s Personal Headline Swipe File ($397) – Your headline is the “ad for your ad” and
responsible for up 75% of the effectiveness of your sales copy. In
Eric’s swipe file he has collected hundreds of headlines for you
to “borrow” ideas from. |
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Swipe File Starter Pack ($47 value) – I
have also got two amazing fitness and weight loss sales letters for you
and a list of the 100 greatest headlines of all time so you can start
your own swipe file. A swipe file is a collection of great ads and
headlines that every great copywriter uses to grab ideas from…
Do you think Eric comes up with all this stuff himself? |
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…So I am giving you the DVD’s AND $541 worth of bonuses!
All in, there’s a goldmine of information for you. And it WILL grow your business; this is how sure I am of that… |
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Let Me PROVE To You How Confident I Am, That This Will Significantly Grow Your Business |
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If you’re unsure
just how effective and valuable this information is to you, then let me
make things clearer by offering you a guarantee double whammy!
First, I’m going to let you try out “Copywriting Secrets Of The Fitness And Weight Loss Market” for one whole year absolutely risk-free.
AND, if you don’t see big, I mean really BIG returns on your $189 investment in this DVD package, I will gladly
give you back your money (less shipping and handling), no questions
asked.
In other words, if you can’t make a significant amount of extra profit with this; then I will happily refund you. The
only catch is, this stuff will not work on the shelf and you must be prepared to give it a try.
Fair enough? |
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Grab Your Copy Right Now, And You Can Start Boosting Your Profit Today |
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As long as you don’t know these “Copywriting Secrets Of The Fitness And Weight Loss Market”, you are putting your business growth on hold, and missing out on many thousands in lost sales.
So make sure you order today by clicking the link below; simply fill out your details and your DVD package will be shipped immediately.
And remember, I’ve made this risk-free for you by offering a one year guarantee. You have nothing to lose by taking action today.
Just click the button below to get started... |
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| For
Your Business Success, |
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Sean
Greeley,
SERG Holdings, LLC |
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P.S. When
I first started my fitness business I was creating the same piss poor
sales copy for my marketing pieces everyone else was. I was also making
the same piss poor profit everyone else was. Discovering AND using
what’s revealed in this DVD package is one of the reasons I
quickly began making more than the rest, and grew into a multi-location
business with hundreds of clients… Click here to get it now. |
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P.P.S. Even
hiring an average copywriter will cost you $500 - $1,000 for a typical
sales letter promoting personal training. Eric (who charges 10 times as
much) will tell you it’s not worth it. Invest the few hours it
will take to absorb the information revealed in this package instead,
and you can save yourself many thousands over the lifetime of your
business. |
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P.P.P.S. And remember, you have one whole year to try these copywriting secrets
out absolutely risk-free. If you don’t think you can save
yourself money, and create sales copy the will make you much more, then
I will happily give you back your money (less shipping), no questions
asked. |
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| About
Sean Greeley |
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Sean is all about making the most from of all you’ve got. As a professional Wake Boarder he rose to the very highest level, representing team USA at the World Championships in Germany. As a fitness business owner, again, he far surpassed what many of his peers in the industry dreamed of accomplishing, creating a 653-strong client base in just 3 years, starting from nothing. Sean was also recognized as one of the Top 10 personal trainers in the country.
Now with NPE, Sean (along with Eric) has started a business from scratch and turned it into a multi-million dollar, industry leading company in just two years. A feat recognized by the very best business builders in the world at the Glazer Kennedy Info-Summit 2008 where Sean & Eric won the “Info Marketer’s of the Year” award.
Sean’s biggest asset is his ability to systemize and then maximize almost every business essential from sales, to marketing, to management and more. If there’s a faster, easier and more profitable way to do something, Sean will find it.
In his spare time Sean likes to “relax” by cranking out nausea-inducing Cross-Fit workouts, surfing in oftentimes shark infested waters, or being pulled at up to 23mph, hanging onto the back of a wakeboarding boat. |
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| About
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Eric is the godfather of direct response marketing in the fitness industry. After introducing fitness marketing that actually works to attract clients and make money, fitness business owners all over the world have been following his lead, and breaking sale record after sale record because of it.
He is most well know for creating a huge arsenal of powerhouse marketing tools, the most renowned being his famous “Icing The Cake” letter sequence. A marketing campaign that has been mailed millions of times, brought in thousands of new personal training clients, and made more money for the fitness business owners who use it than any other marketing tool…ever.
As a self-confessed information junkie, Eric really does have the inside scoop on why people buy. Combine his real-life testing experience with almost 15 years as a copywriter and marketer at the highest level in the fitness industry, and it’s no wonder “super trainers” such as Forrest Walden, Phil Kaplan and Alwyn Cosgrove, just to name a few, have lavished praise on Eric as the premier marketing mind in the industry. In fact, Fitness Together founder Rick Sikorski said this about Eric: “We evaluated many marketing consultants and realized you are the best. On behalf of myself and our hundreds of franchisees, a sincere thank you for all you have done for us.”
When he’s not showing fitness business owners the right way to market, Eric likes nothing more than to sit on his deck with his wife and dog overlooking “lake Ruth” and eat grapes… that have been crushed, fermented, aged in oak and bottled. |
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"My
advice, from one fitness professional to another…I’ve been
out there, I’ve read about every book out there on building my
business, I’ve listened to some
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in the country. This is a diamond in the rough, what we’ve got going with NPE,
and there’s nothing else out there like it. There’s
not a team of guys or mastermind group of fitness business owners
that’s working together to help build each other’s
business. It’s the best win-win situation out there if you really
want to create a lifestyle for yourself that you dream about.” James
'Hut' Allred, New Wave
Fitness Dallas, TX |
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look at NPE right now like an investor would have looked at Bill Gates
and Microsoft in the early 80's. I better get in now and make a ton of
cash while these guys don't know what they've |
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| got. You guys are a great team and are providing a service that you should
be charging at least 3 times as much as you are now (grandfathering me
at old rates of course!) Keep up the great work and I'll push myself
even harder to produce. Every fitness professional needs this if
they want to consitently build their business and create the lifestyle
they truly want and deserve." Andy
Maus, Advanced Fitness Technologies
Wellesley, MA |
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"It’s
great working with Eric and Sean. They are top-notch
professionals. Basically, these guys have got a great system in
place; it works. It works as soon as you |
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it, and they get you motivated to implement it fast. Their program is proven and it’s definitely changed my business
in a short period of time. Basically, they’ve got the
system down; you just have to follow it. They have great follow-up and
training that just continues to build. It’s a step-by-step
process that just builds your business for you. I highly
recommend you use these guys; they’re top notch. They do
everything they say they’re going to do, plus more, so they
deliver. It’s not just something that’s marketing to get
you into the program and then they don’t follow up. They
definitely deliver the results that they’re talking about, so I
highly recommend them." Chris
Hill, Personally Fit - Longview, TX |
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of the results I’ve seen from the NPE program have been great
revenues, higher than ever before. I’m getting many |
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more people in my doors than I was before. I’m a lot more confident in myself, the sales process and my marketing efforts, knowing that what I’m
doing is actually going to work and bring people in the doors.
I’ve had my best months ever in both of my locations since
joining with you guys. Besides that, just getting to work with
you guys and learning all the knowledge from Sean, Eric and
Dick—you guys know a ton, so I’m learning a lot of great
things from you guys, and also getting to work with other people and
brainstorm and mastermind with other studio owners in the NPE program,
who are doing the same types of things in different cities, different
locations. So I definitely owe you guys a lot. I definitely
wouldn’t be where I am right now without the help. I’m
really optimistic and looking forward to the future and the success,
and continuing to work with all you guys - it’s great; thanks for
everything.” Clint
Howard, Fitness Together Tulsa, Oklahoma |
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"It's
rare when you come across tools in business that can immediately change
the health of your business. Sean Greely, Eric Ruth and their NPE
Program have immediately made my |
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Not only has the sales close rate on new clients gone to 90%, but the total dollars of our average ticket sale has tripled. The
impact this has made on the cash flow of my business is
unbelievable. I can't wait for month two utilizing the NPE tools
- look at the impact NPE has made on my business in one month!" Jane G. Westreich Owner,
Fitness Together |
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| “Eric,
after implementing all the great information you and Sean have provided
me over the past 4 1/2 months, I am TOTALLY BOOKED. I have
raised my rates $15 per session , and I am trying to |
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50-55 sessions per week by myself, and I have recently started a little waiting list. Thank you
for
everything you guys do!” Mike Hansen, Hansen
Fitness
Company, Irvine, CA |
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"What
Eric and Sean teach is literally worth its weight in Gold! It's helped
me grow my business to a third location because the marketing
strategies are right on point.My postcard direct mail |
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have improved
130%, my website lead generation has increased by 46% with an average
of 35 qualified leads coming in every month. I’m currently
filming a DVD and establishing my fitness equipment strategic alliance
following your system and I’ve landed my first corporate wellness
contract with a local bank worth $12,000. The strategies flat out work.
We’ve increased our revenues 88%. You guys are awesome!" Shane
Doll, Shaping Concepts, Mt. Pleasant, SC |
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learned so much from Sean and Eric that's really helped my personal
training studio business, but probably the biggest thing is how to get
my prospects to buy now. No thinking it over. |
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"I'll be back," no "have to talk to my husband." I get 'YES!' and I get
it all the time now. My little studio was doing about $3,000 per month.
Now, about 3 months later, I'm doing $24,000 per month in personal
training sales. I'm very happy and the sky's the limit for me
now." Holly
Leonard, BeFit Personal Training, Amherst MA |
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doubled our monthly gross sales from $20K to $40K in 60 days by doing
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us to do. I got out of the ‘weeds’ and my business has
never been stronger.” Michelle Cox,
Fitness Together Cohassett, MA |
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can honestly say that coming to you guys is THE BEST thing I ever did
for my business. Working with you guys is a blast and for the
first time in four years I truly have direction, organization, and a
REAL plan. I could not have any of that without your team! Thanks
for everything, you guys are truly the best! Jason Goggans,
FT
Alpharetta, GA |
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| “Wow!!
First of all, let me say that you guys have been worth every penny we
have - and will be giving you. |
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never dreamed we would be getting so much information and so many tools
to use... I wish I could fully communicate the extent to which I'm
grateful for all your help and advice!!” Camelia Herndon,
Fitness Together, CT |
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